After doing some research on electronic editors, I went with the free version of Grammarly (and no I did not install it into my browser).
This post will explore how to trim your dialogue beats so they read easier with a better flow and pace.
Probably the biggest surprise to me personally as I've moved from writing for myself to writing for others has been the editing process.
How I'm showing appreciation for my beta readers
One person loved my introductory line - another person hated it. They had some comments on my grammar. I took it like a Big Girl. Some of it I agreed with, some made me angry, and some I didn't do.