The Beta draft of my novella, Never Date a Siren is now completed! I'm looking for readers who can review and give me feedback.
This post will explore how to trim your dialogue beats so they read easier with a better flow and pace.
One person loved my introductory line - another person hated it. They had some comments on my grammar. I took it like a Big Girl. Some of it I agreed with, some made me angry, and some I didn't do.